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16．Frank 去年來(lái)到泰中學(xué)習(xí)．在校學(xué)習(xí)期間，他對(duì)學(xué)校提倡的"創(chuàng)建和諧校園"活動(dòng)感觸頗深．請(qǐng)你以他的名義，給遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的父母寫一封信，介紹學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)狀并談?wù)劯惺埽?br />

創(chuàng)建和諧校園
學(xué)生之間和諧發(fā)展	學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，興趣廣泛，友愛(ài)互助…
老師學(xué)生和諧相處	學(xué)生尊敬老師；老師嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生；師生關(guān)系融洽…
人與環(huán)境和諧共存	愛(ài)護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，不隨地亂扔廢棄物…
個(gè)人感想	…

要求：1、表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫．
2、要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)班級(jí)、姓名等．
3、詞數(shù)：100詞左右（信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)）．
4、參考詞數(shù)：respect尊敬；build up建立，創(chuàng)建；a harmonious campus和諧校園；
impress 給…留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad，
Time flies!I've been here for nearly a year．I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one．The students in our schoolis really a good one．The students in our school work hard at their lessons．We take an active part in activities．We are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other．
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students．They work hard and do what they can do to help us．And the students respect their teachers．We get on well with each other．The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy．They never throw waste about or pick the flowers．
In a word，I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school．I love my new school．
Yours，
Frank．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是Frank 給遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的父母寫一封信，介紹自己在泰中的學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)狀并談?wù)劯惺埽畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1學(xué)生之間和諧發(fā)展：學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，興趣廣泛，友愛(ài)互助…
2老師學(xué)生和諧相處：學(xué)生尊敬老師；老師嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生；師生關(guān)系融洽…
3人與環(huán)境和諧共存：護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，不隨地亂扔廢棄物…
4個(gè)人感想：
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
work hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
take part in 參加
be friendly to sb 對(duì)某人友好
get on well with sb與某人相處的好
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
throw about 亂扔
【高分句型】
1．They work hard and do①what they can do ②to help us．
①what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為do的賓語(yǔ)．
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
2．①In a word，I ②am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school．
①in a word 總之
②一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)--am/is/are+過(guò)去分詞．

解答 Dear Mum and Dad，
    Time flies!I've been here for nearly a year．I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one．The students in our school is really a good one．The students in our school work hard at their lessons．We take an active part in activities．We are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other．（學(xué)生之間和諧發(fā)展）  
  The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students．They work hard and do what they can do to help us．【高分句型】And the students respect their teachers．We get on well with each other．（老師學(xué)生和諧相處）The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy．They never throw waste about or pick the flowers．（人與環(huán)境和諧共存）
    In a word，I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school．【高分句型】I love my new school．（我的感想）
     Yours，
     Frank

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本圖表所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并需有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語(yǔ)從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對(duì)每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開(kāi)做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語(yǔ)法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．