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8．中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長、壓力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约海?1世紀(jì)報(bào)正在就"學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞?這一話題進(jìn)行征文．假設(shè)你是二十七中九年級(jí)3班的班長，最近你對(duì)班上同學(xué)課后放松方式進(jìn)行了調(diào)查．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提供的調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報(bào)投稿．

對(duì)象	二十七中學(xué)   九年級(jí)3班
人數(shù)	50人
常用放松方式	1．看電視（15人） 2．玩電腦游戲（16人） 3．聽音樂（10人） 4．進(jìn)行體育鍛煉（9人）
你的觀點(diǎn)	哪一種（些）放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)�？為什么�?/TD>

注意：1、短文包括對(duì)調(diào)查相關(guān)信息的介紹和你自己的觀點(diǎn)；
2、詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右．題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

The Proper Way（s） for Students to Relax（放松）
I am the monitor of Class 3，Grade 9，No.27Middle School．Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class．There are 50 students in my class．Different students have different ways to relax.15 students often watch TV.16 students like to play computer games while 10 enjoy listening to music.9 students think doing sports is a good way．
I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes．Besides，it can keep us healthy．So，I often play ping-pong after class．It's really helpful to both my health and my study．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是依據(jù)"學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞?的調(diào)查談?wù)剬W(xué)生們常見的放松方式以及自己的觀點(diǎn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1人數(shù)：50人
2常用放松方式：1）．看電視（15人）2）．玩電腦游戲（16人）3）．聽音樂（10人）4）．進(jìn)行體育鍛煉（9人）
3你的觀點(diǎn)：哪一種（些）放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)�？為什么�?br />常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
because of 因?yàn)椤?br />be tired of…厭倦…
make sb do sth讓某人做某事
talk with sb 與…交流
make a plan 制定計(jì)劃
find out 找出
in a word 總之
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1.16 students like to play computer games while 10 enjoy listening to music
while 然而，表前后的對(duì)比
2．I think①②taking exercise is a proper way③because it can rest our brains and eyes．
①省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②動(dòng)名詞短語做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 The Proper Way（s） for Students to Relax
I am the monitor of Class 3，Grade 9，No.27 Middle School．Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class．
There are 50 students in my class．（人數(shù)）Different students have different ways to relax.15 students often watch TV.16 students like to play computer games while 10 enjoy listening to music．【高分句型】9 students think doing sports is a good way．（常用的放松方式）
I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes．【高分句型】Besides，it can keep us healthy．So，I often play ping-pong after class．It's really helpful to both my health and my study．（我認(rèn)為鍛煉是最適當(dāng)?shù)囊约霸�因�?/p>

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．