Question

19．最近，老師布置一道作業(yè)，就"Can parents be friends？"這一問(wèn)題在同學(xué)中間開展一次調(diào)查，下表是調(diào)查的結(jié)果

	觀點(diǎn)	原因
45%的同學(xué)	不可能	父母太忙 沒有時(shí)間關(guān)心他們 對(duì)他們要求嚴(yán)格
55%的同學(xué)	可 能	父母常常和他們談心 遇到煩心的事可以向父母尋求幫助
你的觀點(diǎn)	…．．	…．．

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)，寫一份80--100詞左右的調(diào)查報(bào)告．
注意：
1．報(bào)告開頭已給出；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名和地名．
I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on whether parents can be friends．
According to the survey，45% of the students in our class think it impossible to makefriends with their parents as they're too busy to show their concern．And their parents are very strict with them．On the other hand，55% of the students believe they can makefriends with their parents because their parents often talk withthem like friends．Children can ask their parents for help when they are introuble．
In my opinion，it's just natural for parents and children to be friends．They love each other and understand each other very well．Children can get some valuable advice from their parents．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是寫一篇關(guān)于父母能否成為朋友的調(diào)查報(bào)告．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1.45%的同學(xué)；認(rèn)為不可能，父母太忙，沒有時(shí)間關(guān)心他們，對(duì)他們要求嚴(yán)格
2.55%的同學(xué)；認(rèn)為可能，父母常常和他們談心，遇到煩心的事可以向父母尋求幫助
3．你的觀點(diǎn)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
too…to do sth太…而不能做某事
be strict with sb 對(duì)某人嚴(yán)格
on the other hand 另一方面
make friends 交朋友
in trouble 處于困境
【高分句型】
1．According to the survey，45% of the students in our class think①it impossible to make friends with their parents②as they're③too busy to show their concern．
①it是形式賓語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正賓語(yǔ)，構(gòu)成think it+adj+to do sth 認(rèn)為做某事是怎么樣的
②as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
③too…to do sth太…而不能做某事
2．①On the other hand，55% of the students believe②they can make friends with their parents③because their parents often ④talk with them like friends．
①on the other hand 另一方面
②believe后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
④talk with sb 與某人交談
3．Children can①ask their parents for help②when they are in trouble．
①ask ab for help 尋求某人的幫忙
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．in trouble 處于困境

解答 I recently surveyedmy classmates about their views on whether parents can be friends．
According to the survey，45% of the students in our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as they're too busy to show their concern．【高分句型】And their parents are very strict with them．（45%的同學(xué)；認(rèn)為不可能及原因）On the other hand，55% of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with them like friends．【高分句型】Children can ask their parents for help when they are in trouble．【高分句型】（55%的同學(xué)；認(rèn)為可能及原因）
   In my opinion，it's just natural for parents and children to be friends．They love each other and understand each other very well．Children can get some valuable advice from their parents．（我的觀點(diǎn)及原因）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這題圖表類作文，所給材料較為詳細(xì)，邏輯清楚，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)．根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容可知短語(yǔ)主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)為第三人稱，句型以簡(jiǎn)單句為主．寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確．
本題因?yàn)橐�點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，要注意使用正確的英語(yǔ)句型，避免出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)．寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤．只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能寫出一篇滿意的作文．