Question

Tom去年來(lái)到蘇州一所學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，在學(xué)習(xí)期間，他對(duì)學(xué)校提倡的“創(chuàng)建和諧校園”活動(dòng)感觸頗深，他發(fā)現(xiàn)該校學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)主動(dòng)，興趣廣泛，友愛(ài)互助，師生間關(guān)系融洽，人與環(huán)境和諧相處（如保護(hù)環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，愛(ài)護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，不亂扔廢棄物等）
1．請(qǐng)你以Tom的名義，給遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的父母寫(xiě)一封信，介紹學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?br />2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名，詞數(shù)不少于80字，信的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：build up（建立，創(chuàng)建），a harmonious campus（和諧校園）impress（給…留下印象）
Dear Mum and Dad:
Time flies! I have been here for a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school_______                                  
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Yours

Answer 1

　
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
　　The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.
　　In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.
　　Yours,
Tom

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章主要是在新學(xué)校的經(jīng)歷。文中使用了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，take an active part in等較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)，而且還應(yīng)用了不定式等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞以及使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞In a word等為文章增色不少。