Question

電視已成為我們生活中的一部分，看電視有好處也有壞處，根據(jù)你自身的體會(huì)，給大家提些自己的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文：
1. 我們應(yīng)該選擇合適的節(jié)目，比如看紀(jì)錄片可以幫助我們了解許多有關(guān)自然和歷史的知識(shí)；
2. 周一至周五我們學(xué)習(xí)很忙，我們最好在周末或假日里看電視；
3. 必須計(jì)劃好自己的時(shí)間，試圖在學(xué)習(xí)和看電視之間取得平衡是很重要的；
4. 看電視可以幫助我們放松，同時(shí)也能學(xué)到許多有用的知識(shí)；
5. 看太多的電視對(duì)眼睛不好, 你認(rèn)為……。
注意：1.全文要通順、連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)80左右；
3. 對(duì)第6要點(diǎn)作1-2句話的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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Answer 1

Now more and more people own televisions, which present a very vivid world to us. On television, we can watch exciting matches and see most of the places of interests without going there ourselves. Television also plays an educational role in our daily life. Children enjoy learning much interesting knowledge from TV. By providing various TV university courses, television offers various educational programs for different viewers. 
However, television can also be harmful. It hurts our eyes. Watching TV too much influences our sleep and work. Now many students spend too much time on TV, which reduces their study time and does great harm to our eyes.
In a word, we should choose some good programs to watch, especially for children

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中出現(xiàn)很多常見(jiàn)的詞組：plays an educational role in 起重要作用；learn sth from從中當(dāng)中學(xué)到； spend sth on sth 在。�；ㄙM(fèi)時(shí)間或金錢；do harm to對(duì)。。有害。 Now more and more people own televisions, which present a very vivid world to us在這個(gè)句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Watching TV too much influences our sleep and work這個(gè)句子中動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。Now many students spend too much time on TV, which reduces their study time and does great harm to our eyes這個(gè)句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，and連接reduces與does，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。