Question

【題目】隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，手機已被廣泛使用，我們身邊的低頭族隨處可見。請你根據(jù)以下中文提示，以“refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，呼吁大家不要做低頭族。

要點如下：

1 現(xiàn)象：很多人在聚會，吃飯，甚至走路或過馬路的時候低頭看手機

2 后果：過多的低頭族玩手機影響家人與朋友之間的關(guān)系，影響學(xué)習(xí)、工作和睡眠，甚至?xí)�引發(fā)交通事故

3 呼吁大家正確使用手機（如：合理安排使用手機的時間，查閱和學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)的信息......）

4 可適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮

參考詞匯 phubber n.低頭族 be lost in 沉迷于 harm n.傷害

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internets,smart phome are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen everywhere.

Answer 1

【答案】Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet，smart-phones are widely used among people．Phubbers can be seen here and there．

While eating with family members or getting together with friends，some are always busy playing with their mobile phones．It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends．Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still concentrate on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents．It's too dangerous．And others stay up playing games．I think it is really bad for their health，work and study．

In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart-phones．Don't depend on them too much．And I do believe that face-to-face conversations will bring us more pleasure than chatting online．Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文。以“refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。短文重點是兩個方面，一是現(xiàn)象與弊端：揭示現(xiàn)代人用手機的惡習(xí)及其產(chǎn)生的危害；二是觀點與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機，利用好這個現(xiàn)代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。第三人稱或第一稱形式。 認(rèn)真閱讀提示要點，確定主題，根據(jù)要點列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。盡量使用高分句型。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。