Question

【題目】根據(jù)提示,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。必須用上提示的單詞。

世界邁入智能時(shí)代，未來的生活是什么樣的？請(qǐng)你想象一下。

單詞提示: flight car(飛行汽車)，soft screens(柔性視屏), submarine city(海底城市)

Answer 1

【答案】The Life in the Future

What do you think the life in the future will be like? Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot all over the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. When we go out to work, we can take a flight car, which greatly relieves the traffic pressure. The use of soft screens better protects children's vision. In the future, people can live in submarine cities. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care.

Our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard and realize our dreams.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下未來的生活是什么樣的？主要從flight car(飛行汽車)，soft screens(柔性視屏)，submarine city(海底城市)，這三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來時(shí)。注意作文中必須包含提示的單詞，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

When we go out to work, we can take a flight car, which greatly relieves the traffic pressure. 當(dāng)我們外出工作時(shí)，我們可以乘飛行汽車，這大大減輕了交通壓力。

句子When we go out to work,是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care.

由于更好的醫(yī)療保健，人們將活到200歲。

because of the better medical care. 由于更好的醫(yī)療保健。