Question

【題目】書面表達：請以“my ideal school’’ 為題，根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文。

要求：1.語言準確得當，條理清晰；2.必須包含以上所有要點；3.詞數(shù)：80左右。

要點：

1. 一所混合學校；每天早上八點半開始上課，不需早起；下午三點半放學，有時間進行課外活動；

2. 選科目學，我希望上電腦課和體育課，喜歡電腦體育；

3. 和以前比作業(yè)更少、進行業(yè)余愛好的時間更多；每個月進行一次學校郊游；……

My ideal school

Let me tell you something about my ideal school! ___________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Let me tell you about my ideal school! It is a mixed school. Every morning I don’t need to get up early because we have lessons at 8：30. In the afternoon, school is over at 3 :30, then we can do a lot of after-school activities. At school, we can choose subjects to learn. I hope we can have computer lessons and PE lessons every day because I like computer and sports. We have less homework and have more time for our hobbies than before. Every month, we also go on a school trip. We always have fun. This is my ideal school. I love it very much. What about you?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我理想的學校。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Let me...；Every morning I don’t need to ...；I hope we can...；This is...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系.

寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我理想的學校是一所混合學校，接下來介紹學校的作息時間，所學科目，作業(yè)以及活動，最后介紹自己喜歡這所理想的學校。此處tell sb about sth, need to do sth, get up, every day, go on a school trip, have fun，what about等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。