Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示并結(jié)合所學(xué)知識(shí)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹怎樣保護(hù)鳥類。

要求：1. 內(nèi)容豐富，覆蓋要點(diǎn)；

2. 80詞左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Let’s protect birds

Birds are our friends. It’s everyone’s duty to protect birds. And we can all do something.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Let’s protect birds

Birds are our friends. It’s everyone’s duty to protect birds. And we can all do something.

First of all, we must stop hunting birds. And we must stop people from hunting and fishing in the wetlands, because that means the loss of birds’ living areas and food. We can do a bird count every year. By studying the changes in their numbers, we can work better for them. And the most important is that we should encourage more people to help birds. If everyone does something for birds, they can live a happier life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給定材料作文，文章內(nèi)容十分明確。并且給出了相關(guān)信息。在寫作時(shí)，主要文章的結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰，不要漏掉信息點(diǎn)�？梢砸缘谝蝗朔Q寫，寫作時(shí)要注意句子的完整性，做到主謂一致�？梢赃m當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章更緊湊，邏輯更清晰。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了，句子表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。