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【題目】書面表達

為了進一步增強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，學校開展了以”安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一篇演講稿。

1. 慎重交友

2. 遇險報警

3. 安全飲食

4. 其他(1-2點)

注意：1)內容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當發(fā)揮

2)表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范;

3)詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：be careful， on line， danger， call for， go bad

How to keep safe?

As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind。 But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions。

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Answer 1

【答案】How to keep safe?

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some

of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first !

【解析】本文要求寫一篇有關怎樣保證安全的演講稿。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：1. 慎重交友 尤其是網上交友2. 遇險報警 內容可以是當遇到危難，保持冷靜，報警求助等。3. 安全飲食 內容可以是買或者吃食物要仔細，看日期，是否變質，… 4. 其他方面，寫一兩點即可，可以寫遵守交通規(guī)則或防溺水等。常用到的重點短語：make friends交朋友，keep calm保持冷靜，had better do sth 最好做某事，go bad 變質，do harm to 對…有害。

高分句型：

①Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health．吃變質的食物對我們的身體有害．句子中Eating food that goes bad 是動名詞短語做主語，that goes bad作定語修飾food，構成定語從句；do harm to對……有害。

②we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river我們必須記著在河里游泳危險．句子中 we must remember 后面跟的是一個賓語從句，it's dangerous to do sth做某事是危險的，it作形式主語，后面的to引導的不定式短語作真正的主語。