Question

Writing 14(2014 山東煙臺)

      兩個月前，膠東在線對我校初四學生畢業(yè)后的人生規(guī)劃進行了一次問卷調查。請根據(jù)圖表中提供的數(shù)據(jù)信息，寫一篇 100—120詞的調查報告，并結合實際談談你的觀點和畢業(yè)后的人生理想。

     要求：1. 行文不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；

               2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

      Two months ago,Jiaodong Online made a survey on what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation.Here is the result.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

Answer 1

Writing 14

[寫作要點]

1. 本文屬于調查報告類文章，主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

2. 內容要點:①調查的結果;②我的觀點和人生理想。

3. 參考詞匯：so as to為了;in my opinion依我看;aim目標。

[參考范文]

    Two months ago,Jiaodong Online made a survey on what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation. Here is the result.

    65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior schools. About 20% would like to leam useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation. And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families. Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims. I think they should make it clear what to do next.

    In my opinion,we teenagers should have a definite design for our future life. Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time.

    My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients.So,I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University. Fm ready for a hard but colorful senior school life.