Question

根據(jù)提示，寫一篇50字左右的短文；短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點, 要求語句通順、意思連貫。
要點如下：
Kitty來自南京，現(xiàn)在和家人住在江陰。
今年11歲，在7年級1班。
留長發(fā)，不戴眼鏡。
跳舞跳得很好，是舞蹈俱樂部的成員。
非常善良，同學們非常喜歡她。
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       

Answer 1

One possible version:
Kitty is from Nanjing. Now she lives in Jiangyin with her family. She is 11 years old. She is in Class 1, Grade 7. She has long hair and doesn’t wear glasses. She dances well. She is a member of the Dancing Club. She is very kind. Her classmates like her very much. .

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，介紹個人情況。本題給出的材料較為詳細。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題，然后組織成文。注意敘述的條理性，適當使用連接詞。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式，在敘述中使用連接詞，使敘述邏輯更為合理，層次更加分明，為文章增色不少.如: is from +地點。來自哪里，very much,非常等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.