Question

Write at least 60 words about the topic “A good way to ________”（在生活中，在學(xué)習(xí)技能等各方面，每個(gè)人都會(huì)有做某件事獨(dú)特的非常有效的好方法，請(qǐng)以“一個(gè)______的好方法”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）

Answer 1

A good way to get life experiences
Traveling can be a good way to get life experiences. But what will you do if you're a student and don't  have enough money for a trip? Don't worry. Here are some useful suggestions. 
Plan ahead: This is probably the most important preparation for traveling.
Find useful information: Travel books will offer information about the cheapest hotels and restaurants. Also the Internet can help you save money.
Travel in groups:  you can share costs and experiences. 

 
試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文通過(guò)幾點(diǎn)建議寫獲得生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)的好方法，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如Plan ahead，preparation for ，offer information，in groups，by traveling，share costs and experiences等短語(yǔ)；動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)如Traveling can be a good way to get life experiences，By traveling with others；倒裝句Here are some useful suggestions.條件狀語(yǔ)從句如 if you're a student and don't  have enough money for a trip，文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。