Question

9．Write at least 60words according to the given situation （根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格．）
•Nowadays many students are busy with their study．They seldom help their parents with housework．What do you think of it？Try to show your opinions and tell your own experience．
•（現(xiàn)在，許多學(xué)生忙于學(xué)習(xí)而很少幫助家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)，你是怎么看待這種現(xiàn)象的，請(qǐng)給出自己的觀點(diǎn)及自己的經(jīng)歷．）Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework．I don't think they are true，that's all excuses．
In my opinion，doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility．It can also make us independent．We can't depend on others all our life．Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents．I think trying to do some housework can keep us healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up．
On weekdays，I often help my parents clean my bed rooms every morning and wash dishes after supper．At weekends，washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty．And I also help my parents carry something heavy from the supermarket．
As the saying goes'One can't make a big success without being self reliant'，so I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework．現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生說他們太忙于他們的學(xué)習(xí)，并且沒有時(shí)間幫助他們的父母做家務(wù)．be busy with…忙于…；have time to do sth．有時(shí)間做某事．
高分句型二：Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents．分享家務(wù)對(duì)于我們和父母建立好的關(guān)系是有幫助的．Doing sth．is adj．for sb．to do sth．做某事對(duì)于做…是…的．sharing the housework 作句子主語．

解答 Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework．I don't think they are true，that's all excuses．（開門見山：提出現(xiàn)在許多學(xué)生忙于學(xué)習(xí)而很少幫助家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)這種現(xiàn)象，并說出自己的看法，都是借口）
In my opinion，doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility．（提出作者的觀點(diǎn)，做一些家務(wù)事我們的責(zé)任）It can also make us independent．We can't depend on others all our life．Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents．I think trying to do some housework can keep us healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up．（支撐自己觀點(diǎn)的句子）
On weekdays，I often help my parents clean my bed rooms every morning and wash dishes after supper．At weekends，washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty．And I also help my parents carry something heavy from the supermarket．（自己平常經(jīng)常做家務(wù)）
As the saying goes'One can't make a big success without being self reliant'，so I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life．（用諺語來結(jié)尾總結(jié)）

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