Question

5．假如你是Tom，上周日下午和朋友在小區(qū)（neighborhood）空地踢球，請根據(jù)圖片提示寫一篇90詞左右的日記．
要求：（1）根據(jù)前三幅圖片所描述的情景，發(fā)揮想象，寫出事情的結(jié)局；
（2）內(nèi)容合乎情理，故事完整；
（3）文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
（4）文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Wednesday，June 12，Sunny
Last Sunday afternoon，some of my best friends and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood．We really had a good time!Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it flew at a window．It was broken!An angry woman looked out of a window，shouting at us．We were all too frightened!She asked who did that．I went up and said sorry to her．The woman told us not to play football around next time．A bad day!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖畫寫一篇日記，注意日記的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一，三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．描述圖畫；我和一些朋友在小區(qū)空地踢球，不小心把球提到窗戶上，窗戶碎了，老人問是誰做的…
2．結(jié)局；
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
have a good time 玩的開心
look out of…往外看
shout at sb 對某人大喊
tell sb not to do sth 讓某人不要做某事
【高分句型】
1．Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it flew at a window．
so…that，表示如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．
2．She asked who did that．
who作為引導(dǎo)詞的賓語從句，作為said的賓語．
3．The woman told us not to play football around next time．
tell sb not to do sth 讓某人不要做某事

解答 Wednesday，June 12，Sunny
     Last Sunday afternoon，some of my best friends and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood．We really had a good time!Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it flew at a window．【高分句型】It was broken!An angry woman looked out of a window，shouting at us．We were all too frightened!She asked who did that．【高分句型】（描述圖畫）I went up and said sorry to her．The woman told us not to play football around next time．【高分句型】（寫出結(jié)局）A bad day!

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇圖畫作文，本題材料是四幅圖畫．結(jié)合圖畫寫一篇日子，注意日記的格式，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)認(rèn)真看圖，了解圖畫內(nèi)容，展開合理想象．然后根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題．寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級錯(cuò)誤．