Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

第四屆“絲綢之路”寧夏國(guó)際馬拉松賽將于2020年5月舉行。假定你叫李華，你想成為本屆馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給組委會(huì)寫一封申請(qǐng)信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)：擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)，性格開(kāi)朗，做事認(rèn)真，愛(ài)好運(yùn)動(dòng)。（至少再補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)）

2.個(gè)人承諾：盡力提供優(yōu)質(zhì)服務(wù)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：volunteer志愿者

Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Road”International Marathon will be held

in Ningxia in May，2020.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h “Silk Road"International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020.I'd like to be a volunteer.

I'm a girl/boy of 15，a middle school student.First of all，I do well in English.I'm outgoing.I take everything seriously.Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before. What's more，I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.

I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

【解析】

這篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如would like to be a volunteer，a girl/boy of 15，first of all，do well in English，be interested in，what's more，be ready to do，help others，be good at，try to do，look forward to等。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before./ What's more，I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.和I'm very glad that the 4h “Silk Road" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020./ I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race./I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。