Question

【題目】書面表達

下面是大明寫給他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的煩惱。請你以他的朋友Tom的身份，給他寫一封60詞左右的回信，在信中指出他的問題并給他提出建議。信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

My classmate Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly( ). Now she finds out the truth( ) and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?

Yours,

Daming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Daming,

I know your problem. You’ve made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate’s pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn’t tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.

Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. She will realize that you’re truly sorry.

I hope the advice can help you. I’m sure you will make up with her soon.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：提出Tom的錯誤，并提出意見。錯誤一定要清楚，建議要實用。時態(tài)涉及一版現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。

寫作亮點：文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.;Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. 文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。