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你們學校的英語廣播站正在舉辦征文活動:中學生是否應該用平板電腦上課？假如你是劉娜，請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文投稿。提示：

	觀點	理由
一些老師	贊成使用	1學生對學習更感興趣 2老師上課更容易
一些家長	反對使用	1有學生用平板電腦玩游戲 2用平板電腦對學生眼睛有害
你	...	...

要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

（2）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。

Nowadays, our school uses iPads in class. However, some teachers and parents have different ideas about it.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Nowadays, our school uses iPads in class. However, some teachers and parents have different ideas about it.

Some teacher agree to use them. Firstly, if the students use iPads in class, they will be more interested in studying. Secondly, it will be easier for the teachers to have class with the help of the iPads. However, some parents hold the opposite idea. They think some students will use the iPads to play games, and it will have a bad effect on their study. Besides, it is bad for their eyes .

In my opinion, the students should use the iPads properly.The teachers should guide the students to use iPads to learn more knowledge.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，討論中學生是否應該用平板電腦上課。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Some teacher agree to...，it will be...，They think...， the students should...，The teachers should...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系.

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了老師和家長對中學生是否應該應平板電腦上課有不同的觀點，接下來介紹有些老師同意上課使用平板電腦但是有些家長反對，并闡述了他們各自的理由，最后指出表達我的觀點，學生要合理利用平板電腦。此處agree to do sth, be interested in, with the help of, use sth to do sth, have a bad effect on, be bad for, guide sb to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。