Question

【題目】寫作(計20分)

目前，很多學生不重視課外閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進行分析并提出建議。要點：

不重視課外閱讀的原因	1.作業(yè)太多 2.沒有讀書習慣 3. ……
課外閱讀的好處	1.可以學到更多的知識 2. …… 3. ……
對學�；蛲瑢W的建議	……(至少兩點)

要求：1.詞數(shù)在100左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出的內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；

3.條理清楚、語句連貫；

4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。

At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.

Answer 1

【答案】

At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are busy with too much homework. Besides, others hasn’t formed a habit of reading. They like spending their spare time on TV or on the Internet instead of reading.

However, reading has many advantages. We can get more knowledge through reading. Also, it can not only help open up a new world to us but also make us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our lives colorful.

Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers should give us less homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs, then we can share our reading experiences.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們針對學生不重視課外閱讀的現(xiàn)狀進行分析并提出建議。寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進行整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。文中所使用的詞匯和句型，是學生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。而且作者在寫作時，將這些信息進行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達。短文中的語言合乎英語的表達規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強了文章的連貫性。如一些好的短語：form a habit , instead of, not only…but also, Last but not least, For one thing, For another.及so that句型。