Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more informations about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford

University , I’d like to know that you have any special price for us student. As for the money

you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listing? What about lunch?

Is it included? But do I need to bring along own food? How long will the tour last? I’d like

to know the time to return back because I need to prepare my lessons for the next day. Beside,

is there some time with shopping? I really wanted to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more informations about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford

information

University , I’d like to know that you have any special price for us student. As for the money

if/whether students

you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the place listing? What about lunch?

listed

Is it included? But do I need to bring along ∧own food? How long will the tour last? I’d like

Or my

to know the time to return because I need to prepare my lessons for the next day. Beside,

Besides

is there any time with shopping? I really wanted to have a look at the big stores in London.

for want

Yours,

Li Hua

informations--information； that ---if/whether ； student--students ；listing---listed； But---Or； 加my； 刪去back ； Beside—Besides； with—for； wanted—want；

【解析】

1. 第一句informations—information 考查名詞。information是不可數(shù)名詞，故將informations 改為information。

2. 第二句 that-- if/whether 考查賓語(yǔ)從句連接詞的用法。would like to know“想知道”，句意是想知道是否給學(xué)生按特價(jià)，故將that改為if/whether。

3. 第二句student--students考查名詞的數(shù)。此處的us決定了學(xué)生應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)students，故將student改為students。

4．第三句listing---listed 考查非謂語(yǔ)的用法。此處的list和places之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用過(guò)去分詞作

后置定語(yǔ)，故將listing改為listed。

5. 第六句But---Or 考查連詞。此處應(yīng)是和前面的句子構(gòu)成選擇關(guān)系，故將But 改為Or。

6. 第六句 在own之前加my 考查物主代詞的用法。own“自己的”，它的前面應(yīng)該用形容詞性的物主代詞，

故將my添加在own之前。

7. 第八句刪去back 考查副詞的用法。副詞back不能和return連用，故將back刪掉。

8. 第九句Beside—Besides考查副詞。Besides“而且”，Beside“在旁邊”，故將Beside改為Besides。

9. 第九句 with---for 考查介詞的用法。做某事的時(shí)間“time for sth ”,故將with改為for。

10. 第十句 wanted-want考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。本文是作者寫(xiě)的一封書(shū)信，通篇都用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，故將

wanted改為want。