Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò) (每小題1分，共10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Everyone should take the action to reduce haze(霧霾), which is harmful to our health. First of all, I believe if we plant more trees, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes(尾氣) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few peoples live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call in citizens to ride bikes if they travel short journeys.

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone should take action to reduce haze(霧霾), which is harmful to our health. First of all, I believe if we plant more trees, there will be less haze in city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes(尾氣) from cars, thus pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes the main cause of haze and do harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few live. Third, I think it a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call citizens to ride bikes if they travel short journeys.

【解析】

【語篇解讀】霧霾對(duì)人類健康有很大的危害。本文介紹了減少霧霾的四個(gè)有效措施：植樹、懲罰污染企業(yè)、乘坐公共交通工具、騎自行車。

第一處：去action前the�？疾楣谠~。take action是固定短語，表＂采取行動(dòng)＂，action前應(yīng)用零冠詞，故去掉the。

第二處：believe 后加that�？疾橘e語從句。believe之后的賓語從句中又包含有if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，故賓語從句的引導(dǎo)詞that不可以省略。

第三處：their改our�？疾榇�詞。對(duì)應(yīng)本句中的第一人稱代詞we，應(yīng)用our。

第四處：reduce改reducing。動(dòng)詞reduce跟在thus之后作結(jié)果狀語，且reduce與句子主語trees是邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用reducing。

第五處：where改that/which�？疾槎ㄕZ從句。關(guān)系代詞在定語從句中作主語，指代先行詞factories，應(yīng)用that或which。

第六處：is改are�？疾橹髦^一致。主語是exhaust fumes，且該句敘述一般情況，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)are。

第七處：greatly改great�？疾樾稳菰~。修飾名詞harm應(yīng)用形容詞，故將greatly改為great。

第八處：peoples改people�？疾槊�詞。people表示＂人，人們＂，無復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第九處：was改is�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。本文敘述一般情況，都用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故將was改為is。

第十處：call in改call on�？疾閯�(dòng)詞短語。call on sb. to do sth.表示＂號(hào)召某人做某事＂；call in表示＂召集＂。