Question

下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了志愿者慈善義賣活動(dòng)（Charity Bazaar）的情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)照片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。你的短文應(yīng)該包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．簡(jiǎn)述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作等等；

2．結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?/p>

3．舉例說(shuō)明你能為公益事業(yè)做點(diǎn)什么，并陳述原因。

Your help will make a difference!

注意：

1．可參照?qǐng)D片下面的文字及文章開(kāi)頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。

2．詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to help people in need.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to help people in need.

The picture above illustrates a common scene that can be seen in many campuses, where volunteers hold charity bazaars to collect money for the needed. They put their books, toys or even music players on desks for sale. These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who buy the things not just out of love of the items, but also out of their loving hearts.

This picture reminds me of children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of senior citizens in nursing houses who need better care. It is everyone’s responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in.

Like the volunteers in the picture, I also have a willing heart to help people. I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.（154）

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談?wù)摰氖侵驹刚叽壬屏x賣活動(dòng)。除了說(shuō)明圖畫內(nèi)容，還要結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢�，并舉例說(shuō)明你能為公益事業(yè)做點(diǎn)什么，并陳述原因。寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】The picture above illustrates a common scene that can be seen in many campuses, where volunteers hold charity bazaars to collect money for the needed. 這句話里面有兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句， These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who buy the things not just out of love of the items, but also out of their loving hearts.這句話有定語(yǔ)從句也有not only…，but also…這個(gè)詞組， It is everyone’s responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in. 這句話里面有it做形式主語(yǔ)， I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.這句話里面有不定式還有狀語(yǔ)從句的省略式。

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