2.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在其詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每句錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Dear John,
I'm writing to recommend a book with you.Journey to the West is one of the most famous Chinese novel,which was writing by Cheng'en Wu 400years ago.
There have many magic and strange stories in the book,through them we know many principles of our lives.The most important things in your life are belief,loyalty and devotion.Beside,we can learn about the power of love.If we want to be happy,we should love and help the others.What's more,we must be strong in mind if we want achieve success.
I think this book was interesting and valuable.
Li Minghao.

分析 本文主要介紹《西游記》.它是中國最著名的小說之一,四百年前由吳承恩所寫.通過書中的一些奇怪的故事,我們了解了許多生活的原理.如果我們想要快樂,我們應(yīng)當(dāng)愛護(hù)和幫助別人.而且,想要獲得成功,內(nèi)心也要強(qiáng)大.

解答 Dear John,
I'm writing to recommend a book with you.Journey to the West is one of the most famous Chinese novel,which was writing by Cheng'en Wu 400 years ago.
There have many magic and strange stories in the book,through them we know many principles of our lives.The most important things in your life are belief,loyalty and devotion.Beside,we can learn about the power of love.If we want to be happy,we should love and help the others.What's more,we must be strong in mind if we want∧achieve success.
I think this book was interesting and valuable.
Li Minghao.
詳解:
1.with改為to 考查介詞.recommend sth.to sb.意為"向某人推薦某物",是固定搭配.
2.novel改為novels 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù).one of意為"…之一",后接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù).
3.writing改為written 考查動詞語態(tài).分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句,先行詞novel與write之間是動賓關(guān)系,要用一般過去時的被動語態(tài).
4.have改為are 考查詞語用法.There be…句型表示的是"某處有(存在)某人或某物",其結(jié)構(gòu)為There be(is,are,was,were )+名詞+地點(diǎn)狀語.there不與表示"有"的have連用.
5.them改為which 考查定語從句.分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句,先行詞stories在從句中作介詞through的賓語,用關(guān)系代詞which.
6.your改為our 考查代詞.根據(jù)句意:在我們生活中最重要的事情是信仰,忠誠,奉獻(xiàn).用代詞our.
7.Beside改為Besides 考查副詞.beside意為"在…旁邊;在…附近",是介詞,besides意為"而且,也",是副詞.此處應(yīng)是:而且,也.
8.去掉the 考查冠詞.表示泛指"別人",用代詞others.the others指除開一部分人之后"其余的人".
9.加to 考查動詞不定式.want后接動詞時用動詞不定式作賓語.
10.was改為is 考查動詞時態(tài).此處講述的是一般事實(shí),用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文,短文故事,書信等,具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性.短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際,從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作.首先,通讀全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯,在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好,再進(jìn)行逐句改錯.其次,要進(jìn)行逐個句子的改錯.這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意.最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍,檢查答案是否正確,感覺是否還有不妥之處,最終形成定稿.

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