【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤.每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及二個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I have a muscle disease, so I can’t run or climb stairs as quick as other people. One problem is I don’t look any different with other people. So some children in my primary school laughed when I got out of the breath after running a short way. Now my life is a lot easier at high school because my fellow students had accepted me. I am very busy with no time to feel sorry for me. My dream is to work for a firm that develop computer software. Have a disability does not mean your life is not satisfied. So don’t feel sorry for the disabled and make fun of them.

【答案】

【解析】1. quick改為quickly

考查副詞作狀語(yǔ)。句意:我有與肌肉有關(guān)的病,所以我不能像其他人一樣跑或爬樓梯。分析句子可知,本句中的quick是修飾動(dòng)詞runclimb的,修飾動(dòng)詞要用副詞,而quick是形容詞,故要改為副詞quickly。

2.is后添加that

考查表語(yǔ)從句。分析句子可知系動(dòng)詞is后有一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句,缺少關(guān)聯(lián)詞。分析句子可知,從句中不缺少成份,句意完整,故填一個(gè)連接詞that。因此在is后添加that。

3.with改為from

考查固定搭配。句意:?jiǎn)栴}是我看起來(lái)和別人不一樣。be different from…,為固定搭配,意為“與….不同”,故把with改為from.

4.刪除the

考查固定搭配。句意:我跑完一小段短路后就喘不上氣來(lái),所以學(xué)校里一些孩子就會(huì)嘲笑我。out of breath,為固定搭配,意為“喘不過氣來(lái),上氣不接下氣”,the是多余的。故要?jiǎng)h除the。

5.had 改為have

考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。句意:現(xiàn)在我的生活比高中時(shí)容易多了,因?yàn)槲业耐瑢W(xué)們已經(jīng)接受了我。分析句子Now my life is a lot easier at high school because my fellow students had accepted me.可知,句中的had accepted的時(shí)態(tài)是不對(duì)的。本句是說現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)接受了我,可知要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),故把had改為have。

6.me改為myself

考查人稱代詞。句意:我很忙,沒有時(shí)間為我自己感到難過。分析句子可知,本句表達(dá)的是沒時(shí)間為自己難過,故用反身代詞myself。

7.develop改為develops

考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。句意:我的夢(mèng)想是在一家開發(fā)計(jì)算機(jī)軟件的公司工作。分析句子可知,指的是開發(fā)軟件的公司,講的是事實(shí),要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),故把develop改為develops。

8..Have改為Having

考查非謂語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)。句意:殘疾并不意味著你的生活不令人滿意。分析句子可知,本句中的Have a disability在句子中做主語(yǔ),而動(dòng)詞原形是不能做主語(yǔ)的,故用其動(dòng)詞的ing形式。因此Have改為Having。

9.satisfied改為satisfying

考查形容詞辨析。分析本句可知,satisfied在句子中修飾your life,satisfied一般修飾人,修飾物的一般用動(dòng)詞的ing形式satisfying,故把satisfied改為satisfying。

10.and 改為or

考查連詞。句意:因此,別憐憫殘疾人或是取笑他們。分析句子可知,本句中表示“或者”,而and是“和”,只有or表示“或者”。故and改為or。

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