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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號() 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

During the summer of 2001, I started reading books by English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new words from these books, but I had terribly problemsmemorizing them. I had to look up to the same wordmany times, for which was quite troublesome. I realizedI do need a way to remember all these new words. It wasa great success for myself. I started writing down words from books that I read. I would come back fromschool and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down new words and added it to my collection. By the end of last year, my collection has grown to 3000 words.

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【解析】 本文是一篇記敘文，說了作者在2001年夏天開始閱讀英文書籍時的收獲和困難，以及解決困難的方法。。

1.“During the summer of 2001, I started reading books by English, mostly stories.”根據(jù)語境我們可知作者開始閱讀英文書籍，這里“用…語言”應(yīng)為固定搭配“in English”，故將by改為in。

2.“but I had terribly problems memorizing them.”這里的“terrible糟糕的”用來修飾名詞“problem問題”，名詞應(yīng)用形容詞修飾，故將terribly改為terrible。

3.“I had to look up to the same word many times”根據(jù)語境可知，作者必須要查很多次同一個單詞。而“l(fā)ook up to”意為向上看、尊敬，查閱應(yīng)為“l(fā)ook up”。故刪掉to。

4. “I had to look up to the same word many times, for which was quite troublesome.”本題唯一使用的介詞短語為“l(fā)ook up查找”，而從句部分的for無可搭配短語，故將for刪掉。

5.“I realized I do need a way to remember all these new words.”這里的“do表示強調(diào)，意為“確實”。瀏覽全文可知本文為一般過去時，使用“do”時態(tài)出現(xiàn)錯誤，故將do改為did。

6.“It was a great success for myself.” 考查“for myself為我自己”與“for me對我而言”的區(qū)別，本題語義應(yīng)為“這對我而言是一個巨大的成功�！惫蕦�myself改為me。

7.“I started writing down words from books that I read.”“the”用來限制特定的事物，本句中的書是特指作者在夏天看的書，是特定的，故添加the。

8.“I would come back from school and then sit for an hour and two.” 考查固定短語“一兩個小時an hour or two”，故講and改為or。

9.“I wrote down new words and added it to my collection.”這里的words為可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，因此代指它們時應(yīng)用them，故將it改為them。

10.“By the end of last year, my collection has grown to 3000 words.”作者詞匯量的增長是已經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事，因此應(yīng)使用過去完成時，故將has改為had。