Question

17．假如你是李華，近日你的英國網(wǎng)友Mary發(fā)郵件告訴你，為了參加學(xué)校廣播站的面試她做了長時(shí)間準(zhǔn)備，但面試失敗，她現(xiàn)在心情沮喪．請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件安慰和鼓勵(lì)她，并提出一些建議．
注意：1 字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右．
2 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文更連貫．
3 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出．（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Mary，
I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）I can understand what you are feeling now．It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）But one failure doesn't mean that you are not excellent．Actually，you are an intelligent girl．
You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）Besides，you'd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be more experienced than before．
I hope you will be happy again．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的英國網(wǎng)友Mary發(fā)郵件告訴你，為了參加學(xué)校廣播站的面試她做了長時(shí)間準(zhǔn)備，但面試失敗，她現(xiàn)在心情沮喪．請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件安慰和鼓勵(lì)她，并提出一些建議，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：due to 由于；Actually事實(shí)上；are supposed to 應(yīng)該；take advantage of 利用；Besides另外；
  I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）
  It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）
You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mary，
       I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）I can understand what you are feeling now．It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）But one failure doesn't mean that you are not excellent．Actually，you are an intelligent girl．
      You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）Besides，you'd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be more experienced than before．
       I hope you will be happy again．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．