8．李平因在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)被學(xué)校處分，他感到很困惑，寫(xiě)信向你求助．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下結(jié)構(gòu)提示給李平回信．開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出．
優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)
1．與家人聯(lián)系方便；
2．容易找到朋友；
3．QQ聊天很流行；		1．課上發(fā)短信，玩游戲；
2．晚上使用影響休息；
3．考試中用短信作弊；		1．知道手機(jī)危害
2．支持學(xué)校規(guī)定
注意：1）字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；
Dear Li Ping，
Your letter reached me yesterday．It is said in your letter that you are punished for using a cell-phone．
                                                   
It is right for school to prevent you from using cell-phones in school．
Yours ever．

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息李平因在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)被學(xué)校處分，他感到很困惑，寫(xiě)信向你求助．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下結(jié)構(gòu)提示給李平回信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)三個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：There is no doubt that it's convenient for you to get in touch with your parents and you can find your friends easily．（高分句型一）句中使用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句
Some students use cell-phones at night，which makes them tired and sleepy．（高分句型二）句中使用了which引導(dǎo)發(fā)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句

解答 Dear Li Ping，
      Your letter reached me yesterday．It is said in your letter that you are punished for using a cell-phone．I'm sorry to hear that．
      There is no doubt that it's convenient for you to get in touch with your parents and you can find your friends easily．（高分句型一）Besides，chatting through QQ is a popular  way to communicate with others nowadays．
      However，there are more problems with cell-phones．Some students send messages or play games in class，so they can't concentrate on their study．Some students use cell-phones at night，which makes them tired and sleepy．（高分句型二）What's worse，some even want to use cell-phones to cheat in the exam．They spend so much time and effort on cell-phones that they get bad results in study．
      It is right for school to prevent you from using cell-phones in school．
      Yours ever．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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