假如你叫Jack，參加學(xué)校開展的“有困難向誰(shuí)求助”(Who do you turn to when in trouble?)的調(diào)查活動(dòng)，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下表。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信反映相關(guān)內(nèi)容。

求助對(duì)象

比例

理 由

同學(xué)、朋友

58％

年齡相仿，容易理解與交流

老師、家長(zhǎng)

30％

有愛心、有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，可以信任

無

12％

不愿與人交流，難以與人溝通

注意：

1.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全面，并表達(dá)出你的觀點(diǎn)。為了使文章連貫，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

2.詞數(shù)：120詞左右。 3.文章的開頭已給出。

Dear editor,

I'm a student in Senior Two. We have made a survey—“Who do you turn to when in trouble?” Here are the results

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Dear editor,

I'm a student in Senior Two. We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when in trouble?" Here are the results.

Most of the students will go to their friends when in trouble. They're almost of the same age so they can talk with and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends.

In my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help. Different people have different experiences. And they are likely to help you out of the troubles. Then you can remove some of your difficulties and feel relaxed.

Thank you. Best wishes!

Yours, Jack

【解析】

試題分析：對(duì)于材料分析書信類文章，注意格式要正確，內(nèi)容要明確，可以用表觀點(diǎn)的聯(lián)詞，如It is divided into two pathways As for its appearance，等等。注意寫作內(nèi)容所給的信息，不可遺漏，可以多進(jìn)行一些補(bǔ)充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)上：可采取總分總模式。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】almost of the same age，ask for their help，solve their problems all by themselves.，In my opinion等詞組使文章更生動(dòng)；Most of the student，viewing it as a good solution， Only a few students，In my opinion使文章條理清晰；Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much使用從句；書信材料類文章的安排分為三部分，開頭部分：開門見山地表明所分析內(nèi)容。正文部分：從材料中敘述具體情況。結(jié)尾部分：表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。（表示不同觀點(diǎn)歸納的詞語(yǔ)：in a word, on the whole, generally speaking,as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion）

考點(diǎn)：考查對(duì)材料分析書信類作文的寫作

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