Question

4．請根據(jù)下面的這幅漫畫，寫一篇短文．
我畫得再快，也沒有人類砍得快！
馬良先生，再給我們多畫點(diǎn)樹木吧！

要點(diǎn)：1．表述圖中的內(nèi)容；
2．簡要點(diǎn)明原因并提出建議；
注意：1．除詩歌外，文體不限；
2．詞數(shù)100左右；
3．發(fā)揮個(gè)人想像，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
4．標(biāo)題和首句己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
5．參考詞匯：神筆magic brush； 和諧相處live in harmony
Ma Liang's Problem
From the picture we can see Ma Liang is surrounded by a pack of forest animals，such as tigers，rabbits，lions and so on．                                     

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請根據(jù)下面的這幅漫畫，寫一篇短文．我畫得再快，也沒有人類砍得快！馬良先生，再給我們多畫點(diǎn)樹木吧！寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從表述圖中的內(nèi)容和簡要點(diǎn)明原因并提出建議幾個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、要在圖畫的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：is surrounded by被…包圍； catch up with 追趕；cut down砍倒；come about發(fā)生；consequently結(jié)果是；die out滅絕；
Ma Liang gives no direct reply but says"How can I paint more to catch up with the speed at which trees are cut down？"（高分句型一）
People don't plant some trees in return after cutting down ones for their own benefit，which consequently endangers forest creatures and has made some animals homeless and some species even die out．（高分句型二）
Only by living in harmony with nature and animals can we live better and longer，for to protect nature and the earth is to protect ourselves．（高分句型三）

解答 Ma Liang's Problem
       From the picture we can see Ma Liang is surrounded by a pack of forest animals such as tigers，rabbits，lions and so on．They urge him to paint many more trees with his magic brush．Ma Liang gives no direct reply but says"How can I paint more to catch up with the speed at which trees are cut down？"（高分句型一）
        How does this situation come about？People don't plant some trees in return after cutting down ones for their own benefit，which consequently endangers forest creatures and has made some animals homeless and some species even die out．（高分句型二）
        I think the earth is home to us human beings and animals are our friends．Only by living in harmony with nature and animals can we live better and longer，for to protect nature and the earth is to protect ourselves．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．