Question

 假設你是李華。時下,你校不少學生帶手機上學。為此,你班組織了一次班會，討論中學生上學是否有必要帶手機。請你給英語筆友Tom寫封信，根據(jù)下表提供的信息，客觀地介紹討論的情況。可結合你校實際進行適當發(fā)揮，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

一些同學認為	一些同學認為	你的觀點
方便；時尚。	中學生自控能力差；玩手機浪費時間。	（請你實話實說）

注意：

1．     正確使用英文書信的基本格式。詞數(shù)：120左右。

Dear Tom,                                                           

Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school. …                         

 

 

 

 

Yours truly,                                            

Li  Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

Some of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s a fashion.

However, others think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it’s easy to cause the students to vie(攀比，競爭) with each other. If necessary, they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.

In my opinion, as middle school students we should put all of our heart into our studies though following the fashion is understandable. What do you think of it?

With best wishes,                               

Yours truly,

Li  Hua

【解析】

這篇作文是以寫信的形式，注意其格式，認真審題，知道要點內容，把要點加以整理，用適當?shù)木湫瓦M行概括；概括時可以主要用簡單句，也可以適當用復雜句，但要確保復雜句使用正確；切記要點要全，不要遺漏；注意語法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。