【題目】假設(shè)你是李華,外教Santos先生回國前今天最后一次給你班上課,F(xiàn)在,請你代表全班發(fā)言,內(nèi)容包括:

1.表達(dá)感激之情;

2.回憶各種收獲;

3.表不舍與祝福。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)100字左右;

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear Santos,

____________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Santos,

I’m Li Hua. At this moment, I’m honored to express our sincere thanks to you on behalf of my classmates.

We do appreciate everything that you've done for us. We've been very lucky to have you as our English teacher in the past years. With your help, everybody has made progress both in English learning and school life. We’ve enjoyed your teaching and guidance a lot. Your humorous stories, big smiles and encouraging words have already rooted in our memories. Since you will leave soon, we wish you a pleasant journey back home and a happy life there. We'll miss you. Thanks again, Mr. Santos. (108 words)

【解析】本文是一篇發(fā)言稿。最常見的英文發(fā)言稿有開幕詞、閉幕詞、歡迎詞、歡送詞、告別詞和演講稿等。本文屬于告別時(shí)的歡送詞。

發(fā)言稿一般由稱呼語、正文和結(jié)束語三部分組成,開頭和結(jié)尾一般有固定的格式。如

Dear …,

It is a great honour for me to speak here to...

That’s all .Thank you.

正文常分為三部分:第一部分開門見山地提出本人要談的問題及對問題的看法。第二部分說明理由。第三部分照應(yīng)開頭,總結(jié)全文,可以對全文作簡明扼要的總結(jié),也可以談自己的感想、看法或期望。常用到的句式有:In short..., In a word, I think, I expect等。

由于發(fā)言稿在命題形式上側(cè)重于考查正文的寫法,所以寫正文時(shí)要注意:條理要清晰,適當(dāng)增加關(guān)聯(lián)詞和細(xì)節(jié)。語言要簡潔明快,少用復(fù)雜句,多用簡單句。話說的要準(zhǔn)確、易懂,最好運(yùn)用大眾語言。但文中的句型也要善于變化,不要過于單一。

【本文亮點(diǎn)】

本文是一篇發(fā)言詞,在Mr. Santos離開之際,李華代表全班表達(dá)感激和祝福。全文亮點(diǎn)有:1、要點(diǎn)齊全,層次分明。重點(diǎn)表述在第二段,先表達(dá)了對Mr. Santos的感激之情,接著總結(jié)了Mr. Santos上課幾年來的回憶和收獲,最后的不舍與祝福水到渠成,行文連貫。2、措辭準(zhǔn)確,句式多變,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。簡單句和復(fù)合句穿插使用,如定語從句和讓步狀語從句的運(yùn)用,使文章簡潔生動又錯(cuò)落有致。靈活運(yùn)用了多個(gè)短語和搭配,如appreciate doing sth. , …h(huán)ave rooted in one’s memories等的運(yùn)用,為文章增色不少。

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