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16．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Dear Tom，
    I'm glad to hear that you are very interesting in Guoxue．Let me to give you a simple introduction to it．
    Generally speaking，Guoxue refers to the excellent traditional Chinese culture，that includes philosophy，literature，history，music，painting and so on．Guoxue has been playing an increasing important part in China，especially for them students．Not only did it tell us how to study，but it also teaches us how to live．More and more Guoxue courses is given in schools of different levels all over China．
    If you want to get better understanding of Guoxue，you are welcome to China to learn it，feel it and enjoy it．I'm sure you'11 benefit from living in two different culture．I'm looking forward to see you soon in China．
Yours，
Wang Kai．

Answer 1

分析 本文是王凱寫給湯姆的一封信，信中王凱向湯姆介紹了國學(xué)的基本情況，以及國學(xué)在學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活中的重要作用．

解答 Dear Tom，
    I'm glad to hear that you are very interesting in Guoxue．Let me to give you a simple introduction to it．Generally speaking，Guoxue refers to the excellent traditional Chinese culture，that includes philosophy，literature，history，music，painting and so on．Guoxue has been playing an increasing important part in China，especially for them students．Not only did it tell us how to study，but it also teaches us how to live．More and more Guoxue courses is given in schools of different levels all over China． If you want to get∧better understanding of Guoxue，you are welcome to China to learn it，feel it and enjoy it．I'm sure you'11 benefit from living in two different culture．I'm looking forward to see you soon in China．                                                                                                            
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours     
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Wang Kai  
詳解：
1．interesting改為interested；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞做形容詞修飾物，過去分詞做形容詞修飾人，此處修飾you，要用過去分詞形式．
2．去掉to；考查動詞不定式，let是使役動詞，后面跟省to不定式．
3．that改為which；考查關(guān)系代詞，這是一個非限制性定語從句，先行詞為traditional Chinese culture，故用關(guān)系代詞which在從句中作主語．
4．increasing改為increasingly；考查副詞，此處要用副詞形式作狀語修飾形容詞important．
5．them改為us；考查人稱代詞，分析句意為"尤其是對于我們學(xué)生來說"，故用代詞us，與名詞students構(gòu)成同位語．
6．did改為does；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文用一般現(xiàn)在時陳述一個事實，故此處也要用一般現(xiàn)在時．
7．is改為are；考查主謂一致，主語More and more Guoxue courses是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故動詞也要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
8．get后面接a；考查冠詞，understanding是不可數(shù)名詞，表示"理解； 領(lǐng)會"，但如果前面有修飾詞修飾時則要加不定冠詞，文中understanding前有better修飾，故前面加不定冠詞a．
9．culture改為cultures；考查名詞，different意為"不同的"，后面要跟名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式．
10．see改為seeing；考查非謂語動詞，look forward to 中to是介詞，后跟動名詞形式．

點評 通過快速閱讀短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，從詞義，詞性，固定短語，句式結(jié)構(gòu)等方面去找文中存在的錯誤加以修改．