Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom來信：由于過多使用手機，學習和生活受到極大影響，現(xiàn)在父母親禁止使用，非�？鄲�。請回信，幫他找些理由說服父母。

要點如下：

1. 表示同情。

2. 手機對學生的好處：聯(lián)系父母與朋友；查閱資料；娛樂放松。

3. 你的意見。

注意 ： 1.字數(shù)120左右；信的開頭已為你寫好。

2. 可根據(jù)要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tom,

I’m very sorry to know that you are in trouble now.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you! In the letter you’ve mentioned that the excessive use of mobile phone made a negative impact on your study and that you are not allowed to use it anymore. I feel sorry about your situation. And here is some advice to help persuade your parents.

Despite its disadvantages, mobile phones have already become a necessity in our daily life. First, using the cell phone is much more convenient to contact with parents and friends in an emergency. In addition, mobile devices provide us with the possibilities to search for information whenever and wherever we want. Finally, students could download apps on the phones, which offers them a chance for entertainment after long-time learning.

In my opinion, what’s more important for you is to use the cell phones reasonably. As it is said, use your cell phone and don't let it use you.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放作文。李華的美國朋友Tom由于過多使用手機，學習和生活受到極大影響，現(xiàn)在父母親禁止使用，非�？鄲馈�本文要求以李華的身份給Tom回信，說服他的父母親。所以本文使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。要點：1.知悉對方情況，表示同情。2.說明手機對學生的好處：聯(lián)系父母與朋友；查閱資料；娛樂放松。3.個人意見：要合理使用手機，尤其在于使用手機的時間以及用途。建議文章分成三段，三個要點各成一段。其次在第二段中可做適當發(fā)揮，讓理由更充分。同時注意語言的地道性，不要出現(xiàn)中國式英語的句式和表達。