Question

假設(shè)你是李華，暑假期間你們將組織由外國(guó)學(xué)生參加的中國(guó)城市多元文化之旅活動(dòng)——“Discovering China”，你剛到北京的美國(guó)朋友Tom 來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)活動(dòng)有關(guān)事宜。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給他寫(xiě)一封回信：
1.活動(dòng)目的：
2.日程安排：（1）時(shí)間：一周；（2）路線(xiàn)：昆明—井岡山—上�！�蘇杭；
3.發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)120—150；開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Tom,
From your letter I know it’s the first time for you to be in my country and you are eager to know what China is really like.                                                    
                                                                           

Answer 1

Dear Tom，
From your letter I know it's the first time for you to be in my country and you are eager to know what China is really like．I'm glad to tell you that an exploring trip titled" Discovering China" is to be organized in the summer vacation. I think it's a good chance for you to learn more about China．I hope you can experience Chinese culture in every aspect.
First, we'll fly to Kunming, a popular tourist destination for its beauty and mild temperature. Then We'll head for Jinggangshan, which is a former revolutionary base as well as a natural beauty spot．After a one-day visit there. we'll board a downstream ship on the Yangtze River to Shanghai, and meanwhile we can enjoy the great scenery alongside．A famous saying goes, "Just as there is paradise in heaven，there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth”，so a two-day visit to these two cities is a must．The whole trip will last a week．
I earnestly invite you to join us．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

試題分析：本題考查了應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。首先在審題時(shí)要注意文章的格式，要符合書(shū)信的基本格式。同時(shí)也要注意合理的組織文章的要點(diǎn)，以時(shí)間為順序來(lái)組織文章的全部要點(diǎn)，使之成為一個(gè)完整的整體。在選詞上要適合高級(jí)的詞匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，如倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句或者省略句等多種形式，變化表達(dá)文章的要點(diǎn)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作是高考�？嫉奈捏w，把握好各個(gè)應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作格式也是平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中必須注意的，同時(shí)平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)多進(jìn)行作文模板的記憶，萬(wàn)能句型的積累，高中作文寫(xiě)作，要注意在寫(xiě)作之前，首先對(duì)題目進(jìn)行認(rèn)真的審清，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進(jìn)來(lái)，這些單詞、句型都應(yīng)是經(jīng)典的，不會(huì)錯(cuò)的。寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中，多注意靈活使用定語(yǔ)從句，包括非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。要熟悉英美人寫(xiě)文章的習(xí)慣，遇到專(zhuān)有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)唯一性。平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)作文就可以多嘗試使用這些表達(dá)，考試時(shí)才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。