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【題目】Love Tunnel sees lots of love and trash

Bearing a resemblance to the forest－surrounded “Love Tunnel” in Ukraine, the twokilometer tunnel in Jiangning district Nanjing saw a recent rise in popularity as more than 2,000 tourists paid a visit every day this summer.The high number of visitors caused traffic safety concerns and increased the workload of sanitation workers.The Nanjing government had intended to cut the trees by the end of 2014.After the Nanjing government was forced to draft plans to cut the trees due to public pressure, visitors poured into a railway section that runs through thick forest for sightseeing and to take photos this weekend, leaving the railway with overwhelming piles of trash.

However, in response to the government's plan, complaints and outcries were made by the citizens that the love tunnel should be reserved.They claim that walking along the leafy green tunnel is like entering a fairy tale, and a possible decision to tear down the trees could bring the story to a pitiful end.

注釋：sanitation 衛(wèi)生

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．以大約30個(gè)詞左右概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；

2．以大約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“愛情隧道”該不該保留的看法，并說(shuō)出你的理由。

【寫作要求】

1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nanjing government planned to cut the trees surrounding the “Love Tunnel” for the high number of visitors caused both safety concerns and pollutions, which gave rise to the objections of citizens.

I am totally in favor of the citizen's point of view that the fascinating love tunnel ought to be reserved.For one thing, it would be a great pity to put an end to the fairytalelike scenic spot, which brings peace and beauty to the visitors.For another thing, in a bid to solve the problem of safety concerns and pollutions, the authority could come up with a way to preserve the green corridor while also improving the safety of both people and trains.

Therefore, as long as the visitors and the authorities make joint efforts to preserve the love tunnel, it will surely serve as a marvelous tourist attraction for us without any concerns.

【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文內(nèi)容符合要求，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語(yǔ)言精練，同時(shí)句中使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。which gave rise to the objections of citizens.非限制性定語(yǔ)從句用在句中；I am totally in favor of the citizen's point of view that the fascinating love tunnel ought to be reserved.同位語(yǔ)從句恰到好處；as long as the visitors and the authorities make joint efforts to preserve the love tunnel, it will surely serve as a marvelous tourist attraction for us without any concerns.as long as引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句；另外，For one thing, For another thing, Therefore,的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。