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【題目】In recent years，internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast online votes themselves，but also urge others to vote for competitions like the“Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”．

Li Jiang，a high school student，is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition，organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers' daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition，the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much，but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote，or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1．用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文概要；

2．用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2～3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1．寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3．不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】【參考范文1】

Online voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion，online voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space.Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.Therefore，I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.

【參考范文2】

Internet voting is quite popular nowadays.Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting，although some are quite happy with it，and active in doing it.

In my opinion，internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.Firstly，people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don't want to.Secondly，voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors，but rather on how many socialnetworking resources they have.Thirdly，the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.

In short，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted.Therefore，rules should be worked out and strictly observed.Everyone in our society should help those in need，but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.

【解析】試題分析：此類作文對(duì)考生的能力要求極高。首先考生要以30字概述短文內(nèi)容。接下來(lái)就網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票發(fā)表個(gè)人看法并提出理由和根據(jù)。文章要使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主的時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)：1.概述：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票越來(lái)越流行，幾乎人人都參與了網(wǎng)路喲投票，在給人們帶來(lái)好處的同時(shí)，有時(shí)候也讓人進(jìn)退兩難，不知道是否應(yīng)該參與這樣的投票。2.支持：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票和生活密切相關(guān)，我們應(yīng)該積極參與。理由及依據(jù)：(1)它是一種社會(huì)生活的方式；網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票方便容易，不受時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)的束縛，同時(shí)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的反饋迅速可靠；（2）雖然網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票有時(shí)也會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)困擾，但如果有更好的參與規(guī)則，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票也會(huì)更加規(guī)范合理。3.反對(duì)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票會(huì)給人帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響：（1）人們會(huì)因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)絡(luò)投票而產(chǎn)生被迫的感覺(jué)；（2）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票結(jié)果并不客觀；（3）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票可能會(huì)被故意利用。建議考生在寫(xiě)作概述時(shí)，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練不拖沓。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

就第一篇范文來(lái)說(shuō)，內(nèi)容緊扣主題，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，語(yǔ)言精練，同時(shí)使用高級(jí)句子。It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.句中while和whether---or not的運(yùn)用恰到好處；online voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life句中since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；in which candidates go around to seek supports.非限制性定語(yǔ)從句用在句中；voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)；另外，In my opinion，In addition，To be honest，F(xiàn)urthermore，Therefore的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。