分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息最近,你在網(wǎng)上看到了你的英國(guó)好友Mike給你發(fā)來(lái)的帖子,訴說(shuō)自己在考試前總是感到很緊張,身心健康也受到了影響,為此很苦惱.請(qǐng)你給他回帖,提出一些建議.寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):心態(tài)良好,睡眠充足;均衡飲食,積極運(yùn)動(dòng);其它建議(至少兩條).2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):As is well-known to all眾所周知;Therefore因此;Firstly首先;Secondly其次;Thirdly第三;keep a balanced diet保持平衡膳食;Last but not least最后同樣最重要的;have a great impact on對(duì)…有影響;
Firstly,make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep.(高分句型一)
Next,have more talk with your teachers,parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind.Last but not least,listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried.(高分句型二)
I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mike,
As is well-known to all,physical and mental health is of great significance to success in exams.Therefore,I'd like to offer you some practical tips on it.
Firstly,make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep.(高分句型一)Secondly,keep a balanced diet and not eat junk food.Thirdly,take more exercise to keep fit.Taking exercise can also make you full of energy.Next,have more talk with your teachers,parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind.Last but not least,listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried.(高分句型二)The beautiful music can make you relaxed.I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success.(高分句型三)
Best wishes and stay healthy.
Yours,
Li Hua
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