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2．假如你是李華．最近，你在網(wǎng)上看到了你的英國(guó)好友Mike給你發(fā)來(lái)的帖子，訴說(shuō)自己在考試前總是感到很緊張，身心健康也受到了影響，為此很苦惱．請(qǐng)你給他回帖，提出一些建議．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．心態(tài)良好，睡眠充足；
2．均衡飲食，積極運(yùn)動(dòng)；
3．其它建議（至少兩條）．
注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)：110左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mike，
As is well-known to all，physical and mental health is of great significance to success in exams．Therefore，I'd like to offer you some practical tips on it．
Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）Secondly，keep a balanced diet and not eat junk food．Thirdly，take more exercise to keep fit．Taking exercise can also make you full of energy．Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）The beautiful music can make you relaxed．I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）
Best wishes and stay healthy．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近，你在網(wǎng)上看到了你的英國(guó)好友Mike給你發(fā)來(lái)的帖子，訴說(shuō)自己在考試前總是感到很緊張，身心健康也受到了影響，為此很苦惱．請(qǐng)你給他回帖，提出一些建議．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：心態(tài)良好，睡眠充足；均衡飲食，積極運(yùn)動(dòng)；其它建議（至少兩條）．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As is well-known to all眾所周知；Therefore因此；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；keep a balanced diet保持平衡膳食；Last but not least最后同樣最重要的；have a great impact on對(duì)…有影響；
Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）
Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）
I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      As is well-known to all，physical and mental health is of great significance to success in exams．Therefore，I'd like to offer you some practical tips on it．
      Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）Secondly，keep a balanced diet and not eat junk food．Thirdly，take more exercise to keep fit．Taking exercise can also make you full of energy．Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）The beautiful music can make you relaxed．I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes and stay healthy．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．