Question

【題目】請閱讀下面文字,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名（ratings）進行消費的現(xiàn)象；

2. 談?wù)勀闳绾慰创�消費排名，然后用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；學科￥網(wǎng)

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

3. 不必寫標題。

（評分標準）

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。

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Answer 1

【答案】Possible version one:

As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.

There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

Possible version two:

Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay

for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

【解析】今年作文仍然是讀寫作文，即先用30詞概括閱讀材料，然后針對材料中的話題寫一篇議論文談看法。首先要認真閱讀兩段有關(guān)消費排名現(xiàn)象及觀點的純文字材料，然后進行比較和分析，表明態(tài)度，作出價值判斷。

文章首段要簡要介紹兩段材料，第一段材料為一對母子買旅行箱看了網(wǎng)上的評論，結(jié)果買回來的旅行箱質(zhì)量很好。第二段材料為一家人去餐館吃飯，看了on-line rating，選擇去了其中一家，但飯菜很不好吃，從而凸顯出online rating的不靠譜。

然后寫你對online rating的看法，表明觀點，注意用2-3個論據(jù)來支撐自己的看法。

首先在概括要點時，要抓住要點，語言精煉。本文所給材料是描述某種現(xiàn)象，那么就必須用概括的文字來說明某種現(xiàn)象。

第二步是提出自己的觀點并加以論證。首先提出自己的觀點，之后用論據(jù)來證明自己的觀點，結(jié)尾要總結(jié)要點，與自己的觀點句相呼應，使讀者對主題有深刻的印象。