Question

近幾年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的家長(zhǎng)在學(xué)校附近租房給孩子陪讀。某英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站“Your Opinions”欄目近期推出一個(gè)討論話題“Should parents rent a house to accompany their children?”,邀請(qǐng)網(wǎng)友參與討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；          2. 分析陪讀現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因；
3. 就陪讀現(xiàn)象作簡(jiǎn)短的評(píng)論。
注意：詞數(shù)100~120。
Should parents rent a house to accompany their children?
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?
In recent years, many parents choose to rent a house near the school to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern in China.
There are some reasons why so many parents choose to accompany their children. First of all, most children are the only child of the family, whose parents love them so dearly that they would like to offer a better living condition to them. Second, most parents consider it necessary to rent a house nearby in order to take good care of their children so that they can keep track of their children’s academic performance while their children are studying in school.
Personally, it is OK for children to live in the school dormitory because it is necessary for  them to form the habit of living independently.

試題分析：這篇文章是提綱作文，話題是Should parents rent a house to accompany their children?只給了幾個(gè)提綱，沒(méi)有具體的內(nèi)容，考生要圍繞3個(gè)提綱展開(kāi)敘述，這時(shí)語(yǔ)言能力是英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵。沒(méi)有掌握相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)，就談不上寫(xiě)作了。因此考生平時(shí)要從動(dòng)詞的五種基本句型抓起，同時(shí)有意識(shí)的使用一些復(fù)合句一些修辭性句式，可以給作文增色很多。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，學(xué)生教應(yīng)重視對(duì)語(yǔ)言能力的培養(yǎng)，豐富感知內(nèi)容，為后面的理解運(yùn)用加工階段做準(zhǔn)備。學(xué)生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中要豐富詞匯量，注意積累好的句子，諺語(yǔ)等語(yǔ)言素材。從而能在最短的時(shí)間內(nèi)掌握寫(xiě)作的技巧。