Question

就"現(xiàn)代師生關(guān)系"這個主題發(fā)表你的看法,并包括如下點:
1你是否愿意告訴老師你內(nèi)心的想法?為什么? 
2你希望你與你老師之間關(guān)系怎樣?如何才能建立這種關(guān)系?
字數(shù)：120

Answer 1

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The relationship between a teacher and a student can be either good or bad, helpful or harmfuh. Either way, the relationship can affect the student for the rest of his life. A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and well mutually understandable. Whereas, a hard relationship can discourage the student from learning and make teaching an unpleasant task.
In order to have a good teacher-student relationship, it is important that the teacher and the student respect each other. The teacher does not have to force the student to learn. In fact, many students will often work hard simply because they respect their teachers and want to please them. The teacher should motivate and encourage the student without forcing him.
He needs patience and understanding. Learning can be fun when the student has the right attitude towards it. As for the student,he must always show the teacher proper respect. He should be eager to learn and willing to work hard. It is also important to listen carefully and pay attention. Otherwise he would not be able to profit fully from his teacher's knowledge and assistance.
In conclusion, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutually heneficiah The student gains knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.

試題分析：英語寫作首先要仔細審題，確定人稱，時態(tài)，文體。內(nèi)容要點要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。我們在寫作中應(yīng)當(dāng)遵循語言表述的經(jīng)濟原則，即用盡可能少的形式表達盡可能多的語義內(nèi)容，力求簡潔精練。由于對英語詞匯了解和掌握有限，再加上母語對我們思維的影響，寫作中常會出現(xiàn)贅詞和冗繁的問題。贅詞是指使用了不必要的詞語。這些詞語只是用來“填空、充數(shù)”的，沒有增加任何新的意義；冗繁是指對讀者來說不十分必要的信息，或句子中重復(fù)的詞語。贅詞和冗繁使句子結(jié)構(gòu)松松垮垮，使文章冗長、拖沓。因此，我們應(yīng)該在用詞上仔細揣摩，準確清晰地表達我們的思想，剔除冗詞贅語，使文章言簡意賅。
點評：為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句�？荚嚂r最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。