Question

目前，校園安全事故時(shí)有發(fā)生。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100～120詞的短文，簡(jiǎn)單描述一下校園安全問(wèn)題并提出改進(jìn)的措施。

Answer 1

One possible student version:
Nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety, including bicycle theft, traffic accidents and students’ getting injured in school. It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families. How to protect us students?
There are several ways. First, we should raise our safety awareness---to take care of ourselves in school. Second, traffic regulations must be observed. Besides, we should be more careful in taking physical exercise. Last but not least, we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students. We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight.
All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性短文寫(xiě)作。本文的話(huà)題是校園安全。首先要描述校園安全的現(xiàn)狀，最近一段時(shí)間校園安全問(wèn)題頻現(xiàn)，引起廣泛關(guān)注。分析原因方面可以從社會(huì)，學(xué)校家長(zhǎng)學(xué)生對(duì)校園安全重視不夠，措施不得力，實(shí)施不到位。改進(jìn)的措施可以從加強(qiáng)教育，更新設(shè)備等方面進(jìn)一步展開(kāi)。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：開(kāi)放性作文只給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。