Question

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
SHANGHAI --- Police in Shanghai have asked a district procurator（檢察官）to approve the arrest of a postgraduate student who admitted having killed his roommate by poisoning him.
The suspect, a man surnamed Lin, who is attending medical school at Fudan University, held a jealousy against his 28-year-old roommate Huang Yang over a trivial thing and planned the poisoning, an initial police investigation showed.
Lin took a deadly chemical compound from a university lab and used it to contaminate the water dispenser in their dormitory at noon on March 31, the investigation showed.
Huang, a third-year medical postgraduate student at Fudan University, showed poisoned symptoms after drinking water from the dispenser on April 1 and was pronounced dead due to multiple organ failure on April 16.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1. 以約30詞概括短文的大意;
2. 然后以約120詞就“同學(xué)之間該如何相處?”為主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：
（1）同學(xué)之間因成長(zhǎng)環(huán)境、家庭教育和性格等的不同存在很大差異；
（2）在相處時(shí)發(fā)生沖突（conflict)的原因：如遇事不夠冷靜、為小事?tīng)?zhēng)吵等;
（3）同學(xué)之間應(yīng)該如何相處。
【寫作要求】
1. 可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接抄襲原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
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Answer 1

The above passage mainly tells us that Shanghai police have asked to be approved to arrest a Fudan postgraduate student, who has poisoned his roommate to death only because of a trivial matter.
After reading the news, I was greatly shocked and many ideas crowded into my mind. Actually, there are many differences between students who come from different families. Since students are brought up in different environments, they will have different habits and characters, which will cause many conflicts in daily life. In such cases, these youngsters will often act impulsively, quarreling or even fighting with his or her classmates because of some trivial things. They may curse each other with hatred words or ask their friends to isolate these students. What’s worse, they may find some excuses to hurt, beat or even bully those who have conflicts with them. As a result, students are not able to get along well with each other.
As far as I am concerned, as a teenager, though we mostly come from a one-child family, we should learn to share, to help each other and to endure. After all, to err is human, but to forgive is divine. If conflicts happen, we should look before we leap and after a second thought, we will keep a harmonious relation with our classmates, roommates and friends.

解析試題分析：這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個(gè)詞概括本文的故事，再以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：（1）同學(xué)之間的差異；（2）沖突的原因；（3）同學(xué)之間怎樣相處。這道題目要求比較嚴(yán)格，所以在寫作之前一定要看清題目。題目還要求你可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時(shí)盡量使用自己會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
考點(diǎn)：考查讀寫任務(wù)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于根據(jù)原文內(nèi)容寫作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。