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近年來發(fā)生在校園的意外事件不斷增加，校園安全問題備受關(guān)注，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的文章，字?jǐn)?shù)在100-120之間，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．闡述目前校園里出現(xiàn)的一種問題
2．對(duì)此我們應(yīng)該采取哪些措施
3．對(duì)校園安全的展望
注意：文章的第一句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Campus Security
Security issue has always been one of our main concerns, and when it comes to the campus security,
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Campus Security
Security issue has always been one of our main concerns, and when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it more seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen. A surrounding with stealing can’t be worse for studying. In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?
On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we find something unusual in our campus., we should report it to the campus guard immediately .On the other hand , more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible .Besides , a proper number of security guards should be arranged to walk around the
In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as we work together and schools will try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.

解析試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求就校園安全問題寫一篇文章，校園是學(xué)生生活學(xué)習(xí)的地方，所以就此話題學(xué)生應(yīng)該寫起來得心應(yīng)手，但是在審題時(shí)要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：首先，闡述目前校園存在的問題時(shí)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，對(duì)校園展望部分應(yīng)該采用將來時(shí)態(tài)；其次，文章是三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，所以最好采用經(jīng)典的三段式來說明現(xiàn)狀，措施及對(duì)未來的展望；最后，行文時(shí)要注意詞法，句法和連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用，以便使文章前后連貫，給人以耳目一新的感覺。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章采用經(jīng)典的三段式來表述現(xiàn)狀，應(yīng)采取的措施以及對(duì)未來的展望。這樣的模式使范文脈絡(luò)清晰，要點(diǎn)突出。此外文中并列句，復(fù)合句和一些固定句式的使用不僅使文章避免了句式的單調(diào)也給文章錦上添花，使得范文亮點(diǎn)紛呈，比如定語從句there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen條件狀語從句和并列句 campus security will be improved as long as we work together and schools will try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.以及.固定句型when it comes to等。再者文中on the one hand ，on the other hand等短語也使文章表述更加清楚明了，結(jié)構(gòu)更為緊湊�？傊�這是一篇值得借鑒的優(yōu)秀范文。
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