Question

Dear fellow students,
The 90^thanniversary of our school is on the way.
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Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
The 90^th anniversary of our school is on the way. I propose students in our school should do something meaningful to celebrate.
Making every effort to work hard is encouraged. The atmosphere in class is vital to our school. We are to be the prde of our school in the future. Meanwhile, we’ll never forget our teacher. But for their efforts and devotion, we wouldn’t make it. Also, we’re expected to call on others to keep the surroundings clean on campus. We’re supposed to change the habit of littering wherever we go. After-class activities make our school life colorful. Our school clubs can also have a chance to make our school famous for its cultural environment.
To make our school better, we students ought to do our best to devote ourselves to the development of our school.
Li Hua

解析試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫(xiě)作，主要讓學(xué)生以“打造和諧校園”為主題展開(kāi)敘述，內(nèi)容應(yīng)從包括以下四個(gè)方面來(lái)：一 ：學(xué)習(xí)意識(shí)。二：尊師重道。三：校園環(huán)境。四：課外活動(dòng)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
文章使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子給文章增色，如The atmosphere in class is vital to our school.（be vital to 對(duì)...是重要的）, But for their efforts and devotion, we wouldn’t make it(but for 要不是)，be supposed to do應(yīng)該做某事，call on sb to do sth呼吁某人做某事，并且主語(yǔ)了句子的銜接如：meanwhile ，also 等。
考點(diǎn)：記敘文寫(xiě)作。