Question

12．假如你是李華，你校英國交換生Tom在郵件中說他被Oxford University錄取了，邀請你本周六晚參加慶祝派對，但你那天要參加漢語詩詞（poetry）比賽，不能參加派對．請用英語給他回復(fù)郵件．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，
Congratulations on your being admitted to Oxfored University!
I'm grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to to be held this Saturday evening．（高分句型一）However，much to my regret，I have to decline your kind invitation．As you know，a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition，which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening．（高分句型二）It's a great pity that I can't make it to your party．（高分句型三）But I've prepared a gift for you and hopefully you will like it．
May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校英國交換生Tom在郵件中說他被Oxford University錄取了，邀請你本周六晚參加慶祝派對，但你那天要參加漢語詩詞（poetry）比賽，不能參加派對．請用英語給他回復(fù)郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Congratulations on恭喜；However然而；much to my regret令我非常遺憾的是；enjoy yourself 玩的愉快
I'm grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to to be held this Saturday evening．（高分句型一）
As you know，a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition，which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening．（高分句型二）
It's a great pity that I can't make it to your party．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
      Congratulations on your being admitted to Oxfored University!
      I'm grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to to be held this Saturday evening．（高分句型一）However，much to my regret，I have to decline your kind invitation．As you know，a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition，which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening．（高分句型二）It's a great pity that I can't make it to your party．（高分句型三）But I've prepared a gift for you and hopefully you will like it．
      May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．