Question

和睦的家庭有利于孩子的個(gè)性發(fā)展和家人的身心健康。請你根據(jù)表格中的信息和自身的感受，以How we can build up a harmonious family 為題用英語寫一篇短文。

主要特征	充滿溫暖、愛心和歡笑； 相互關(guān)愛、尊重和理解
主要益處	生長在和睦家庭環(huán)境中的孩子會樂觀向上； 　生活在和睦家庭中的父母會健康快樂
父母該 怎么做	言行舉止上做好表率； 充分尊重、信任孩子； 經(jīng)常與孩子溝通交流
你該怎么做	……

注意：

1.對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)120左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

How we can build up a harmonious family

A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health.

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Answer 1

How we can build up a harmonious family

A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. A harmonious family is always full of warmth, love and laughter. Parents and children love and show concern for each other. They also respect and understand each other. If a child grows up in a harmonious family, he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic. Otherwise, he may be miserable and pessimistic. Meanwhile, parents in a harmonious family are sure to live happily and more healthily.

Since a harmonious family plays a very important role in our life, it is up to every family member to contribute to the building of such a family. First of all, parents should be a role model for their children and pay more attention to their own words and behavior. Besides, they must trust their children and often communicate with them.

As children of the family, we should also respect and understand our parents, and try to share their burdens. If we do so, our home will always be harmonious.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以How we can build up a harmonious family為題寫一篇英語短文，來談?wù)劶彝ズ湍赖闹匾�性以及怎樣建立和睦的家庭。寫作要點(diǎn)以表格的形式給出，清楚明了，可以從和睦家庭的特征、家庭和睦的好處、父母怎樣做、孩子怎樣做這四個(gè)方面來寫。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，注意語法知識的正確運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了大量的固定短語：is essential to；full of；show concern for；grows up；is likely to be； are sure to；plays a very important role in；it is up to sb to do sth；contribute to；pay more attention to；communicate with等，使作文內(nèi)容顯得非常充實(shí)，且有說服力；

范文注意使用Otherwise, Meanwhile, First of all, Besides等來起銜接作用，使作文條理清晰，層次分明。

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