Question

全球氣候變暖是目前人類面臨的最大的環(huán)境問(wèn)題之一。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，為“節(jié)能減排”獻(xiàn)計(jì)獻(xiàn)策。

背景	溫室氣體的排放導(dǎo)致大氣層中二氧化碳的含量越來(lái)越高，溫度升高。
后果	海平面急劇上升，自然災(zāi)害頻繁等。
措施/建議	1.節(jié)約能源 2.綠化環(huán)境 3.提高公眾意識(shí)

注意：
1. 結(jié)合所學(xué)的重點(diǎn)單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型，寫(xiě)一篇120左右的短文。
2. 不要逐句翻譯 （ 尤其是措施部分要具體 ）
3. 文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示：溫室氣體的排放 the emission of greenhouse gases
With the rapid development of the economy, pollution has become one of the most serious problems nowadays. ____________________________________

Answer 1

With the rapid development of the economy, pollution has become one of the most serious problems nowadays. The emission of greenhouse gases not only results in more and more CO2 in the atmosphere but also keeps the temperature going up. It has many harmful effects on human beings and nature, such as the rise of sea levels, many natural disasters and so on.
Therefore, it’s time to take steps to make a difference. First of all, we should save energy .We should turn off the lights, the TV ,the computer and so on if we are not using them any longer. We can walk or ride a bike when we go out instead of using motor vehicles. Secondly, we should plant more trees as they absorb carbon dioxide from the air and refresh our spirit when we look at them. Finally and most importantly, we should talk with our family and friends about global warming to raise people’s awareness of the importance of protecting the environment.

解析試題分析：本文屬于提綱來(lái)短文，同時(shí)也是議論文。使用第三人稱為主與一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要點(diǎn)為：1.全球氣候變暖是目前人類面臨的最大的環(huán)境問(wèn)題之一。2.溫室氣體的排放導(dǎo)致大氣層中二氧化碳的含量越來(lái)越高，溫度升高。3.海平面急劇上升，自然災(zāi)害頻繁等。4.措施：節(jié)約能源；綠化環(huán)境；提高公眾意識(shí)。寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】本文的亮點(diǎn)在于連接詞的使用，如：first of all, secondly, finally and most importantly；另外一些高級(jí)詞匯運(yùn)用也很多，如atmosphere；take steps；make a difference；raise people’s awareness of；absorb carbon dioxide。
考點(diǎn)：考察提綱類短文寫(xiě)作