Question

假設(shè)你是李華，前天是你的外國朋友Anne的生日。你本答應要參加她的生日聚會，但你當時正忙著準備期末考試，不小心忘了赴約。請寫封信向Anne表達你的歉意，說明原因，并提出補救的方法。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)120詞左右；
2.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實班級和姓名；  
3.可適當增加內(nèi)容。
Dear Anne，
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Yours truly，
Li Hua  

Answer 1

Dear Anne，
I am indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you, but the end-of-term examination is around the corner， so I was too busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examination？ I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together. Once again， please accept my sincere apology.
Yours truly，
Li Hua  

解析試題分析：本文是一篇書信體裁的書面表達。首先要注意書信的格式，即：稱呼、正文和結(jié)尾。分析本篇書面表達的要求，書信可以分為三方面內(nèi)容，即表達歉意，解釋理由，然后提出補救的措施。根據(jù)書信的特點，在信的開頭要開門見山提出寫信的目的，在本文是要表達自己爽約的歉意。因為寫作本文的目的是道歉，所以語言一定要誠懇，禮貌。可使用的短語句型有：I am very sorry that …;forgive sb for doing ,I apologize to sb for doing sth , 在寫作時還要注意語言的連貫流暢，要適當使用連接詞，使上下文語義緊湊。此外，寫作時還要注意時態(tài)和標點符號的正確使用。
【亮點說明】本篇書面表達語言自然流暢，段落清楚，層次分明。在本文中作者使用indeed 、awful、sincere、should have come和I do long for a pleasant chat with you等詞語和結(jié)構(gòu)表達了自己深深的歉意和誠懇的請求，用詞非常貼切，此外，高級詞匯long for、around the corner 、precious的運用也顯示了作者對詞語的準確把握和駕馭能力。在文章中作者還使用了多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)，如結(jié)果狀語從句I was so busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment.，強調(diào)句型It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together等，所有這些都使文章亮點紛呈，可以說是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的范文。
考點：考查提綱作文。