Question

你們學(xué)校最近做了一項調(diào)查,調(diào)查的主題是”你寒假會去做兼職掙錢嗎?”下面是調(diào)查結(jié)果:

結(jié) 果	原 因
89%選擇不去	父母不允許 學(xué)習(xí)太忙,沒時間 不知道自己能做什么工作
11%選擇去	學(xué)以致用 積累社會經(jīng)驗 減輕父母的壓力

請你就此用英文寫一篇文章.
注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)拓展內(nèi)容以使行文連貫。
開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總數(shù)。
Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
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Answer 1

Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so. Second, they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. Third, they are not sure what job they can do. 11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through work, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents’ pressure..

解析試題分析：這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫作，它以表格的形式提出了論點（寒假兼職的優(yōu)點和缺點）和論據(jù)，還以文字提示形式提出了話題（寒假是否會去做兼職賺錢）及需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就此發(fā)表個人的見解。本文的重點是表格中兩種方式的優(yōu)，缺點，根據(jù)題目的特點，以三段式的形式來寫作比較好。根據(jù)內(nèi)容，盡管討論已經(jīng)發(fā)生，但它是就一般的暑假假期計劃而進行的討論，沒有特定的時間界定，因而考生應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主。相當(dāng)一部分考生用一般過去時進行論述，這會失掉較多的分數(shù)。從題目所給的開頭可知應(yīng)用第一人稱來寫。
【亮點說明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次清楚，觀點明確，語言表達準確，多用詞組和句式： Allow sb. to do “允許某人做”，. they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. 這句話用了so…that…句型， they are not sure what job they can do. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. 這兩句話用了賓語從句還有范文還使用了 First, Second, Third, In addition,這些關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
考點:考查議論文寫作