Question

假定你是一名中學(xué)生，名叫李華。最近, 你班同學(xué)就 “Whether real friendship exists between boy students and girl students” 這一話題展開討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息, 給報(bào)社寫一封信, 并簡(jiǎn)單地發(fā)表自己的看法。詞數(shù)100字左右；書信的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

絕大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為	少數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為
男女同學(xué)之間存在真正的友誼 追求(seek)友誼是人的天性(human nature) 互相幫助, 互相學(xué)習(xí), 共同提高	男女生之間不存在真正的友誼 易造成早戀(fall in love at an early age)現(xiàn)象 影響(affect)學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)

 
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about the discussions we’ve had about ….         

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about the discussions we’ve had about whether real friendship exists between boy students and girl students.
Opinions are divided on the question. Most of the students are for the idea that real friendship exists between them. They believe that it is human nature to seek friendship. It helps them learn from each other and improve themselves together.
    On the other hand, a few of them think that there is no real friendship between boys and girls. Because it can easily lead to falling in love at an early age and thus affects their study.
In my opinion, boys and girls can develop their friendship properly.
Yours truly,
   Li Hua                            
 

試題分析：本篇寫作是書信，題材是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。話題是男女生的友誼，這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。